Practice 6

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Death Penalty



23/11/18


I. Death penalty should be completely abolised in our society owing to the fact that it doesn't decrease crime rates, costs a lot of money and puts innocent lives at riks.

  II. There is no evidence...

       A: States with an alternative
       B: Reasons
       C: States without death penalty

  III. The second reason why...

       A: Money
           1. E
           2.    X
           3.       A M P L E S

   IV. Puts inocent lives at risk.

       A: Causes and results of the renstatement of the death penalty in the US.
           1. Missouri, Texas and Virginia.
       B: Execute innocent people is morally reprehensible.
           1. If someone dead turns later to be innocent there is no turning back.

V. Death penalty should be completely abolised in our society owing to the fact that it doesn't decrease crime rates, cost a lot of money and puts innocent lives at riks.

-This would be a better essay if the concluding sentence wasn't the same as the theses statement, the paragraphs were more simmilar respect lenght and the introduction paragraph were shorter with more clear information.

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