Wrting Journal 23

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Parties and alcohol



8/11/18


12:21 pm

Parties are a known way of having fun. Young people are the ones that are most used to go to parties. However, also teenagers and adult people go to party too. The good thing about parties is that you can enjoy time with your friends dancing, listening to music and drinking. The bad thing is that many people lose control and could hurt other people, this is caused by alcohol and drugs. For example, if you know that you are going to drink alcohol at a party, you know that you shouldn't drive after drinking it due to causing an accident. Another example is all the fights that are caused at many discos due to people that get drunk. I think that we should avoid that because we do not need to drink as much to have fun. 

12:30 pm


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